For both...
The first one was alright... this one was crap. We aren't here to watch previews or trailers or whatever this thing is supposed to be. Give us a movie. Your story (while not necessarily the most original) is good. You have a lot of options with it. Work on your art skills, make this stuff look good. Until then, keep it off of newgrounds and inside your works-in-progress folder.
Good.
A better mic would be nice. Some of the animations and drawing were poor, plus it had a rough look to it overall...
Dude....
Come on... sorry, but I'm here to watch flash videos...
before this...
Before this episode... these series was just a cute little flash series I had watched with very nice graphics... all of the sudden this is an emotional roller coaster. Congratulations on making such an excellent series so far...
Can't wait for step 5.
No worries
The file size was tiny. You definitely have a knack for art. Now just make a story around that artwork and you've got something really special.
thanx! i might add to this then !
Adam Phillips
never fails to disappoint me. I keep seeing amazing flash videos, and then I see his and realize just how bad everything else really is.
Well.
I liked where this was going in the beginning. Laying down a nice plot, giving the flash a slow start. But unlike most people, I prefer a storyline to random fighting scenes.
Amazing graphics though.
Awesome!
That is truely an amazing piece of work. Congratulations on finding an original concept and executing it with such artistic skill. Thank you for your hard work.
Alright
The beginning was alright, I was kind of interested. However, you bombed it toward the middle/end (I didn't watch the whole thing). You get a 5 just cuz I'd like this to stick around.
HA! I didn't bomb anything! This wasn't supposed to well anyway!
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