What you had looked good, but there just wasn't enough there. The text at the start had a typo and went by too fast (or perhaps I just read too slowly...) Either way, pausing the video there with a play button to continue would solve that issue.
The fight sequence looked nice but was far too short. Add more depth to this.
Good luck getting this passed. Put more time into your next one and you'll do well.
The spriting was done well.
You're already on episode 8? I'm assuming you're just going straight through the actually storyline. I believe it'd be better if you composed a larger video than just one scene at a time.
That was fantastic.
The art is there...
It looked really nice. Next time, make a flash with some kind of storyline (anything....) and sound would be nice too...
The animation was pretty smooth, and overall, it was nice to watch.
This song is meaningful...
and even though I didn't like the song, it had emotion behind it, and anything with emotion put into it is beautiful.
The graphics weren't great, an actually flash could have done more, but it worked just the same.
Blender is a great program.
Work on what you have some more, give them some details here and there... if you are going to do this do it well. Good luck.
It was worth watching. Please spell-check next time... idk if you did that on purpose, but it's so annoying seeing spelling errors. You've set yourself up with a great start, this thing has a ton of potential to become something special.
Good job and good luck.
Thanks Jmac. Yeah my animator changed so much of this flash.
It's not the best, but it better than 80% of the stuff that gets submitted... nice job.
This changes everything.
This is the best thing to be created with flash, to date.
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